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I'll wait for you

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Updated April 2021
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Background photo from Itai Danan Neoluminance.com (manipulated with permission).
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

As a whole, let me say, this is amazing! This is the sort of work I strive towards and I love the work. The whole image tells a story and is well put together.

I'm most amazed with the chain link and stance of the knight. His head is awkward. Like held uncomfortably between hanging down and the connection to the spine feels a little lost. Maybe it's the angle on the face? I'm not quite sure. But don't beat yourself up about it, faces are hard. The armor sits perfectly like I could imagine seeing it and it's fairly realistic.

The girl in the background blends with the rays of light which is amazing. The whole scene.

You did an incredible job with the details and not having the details pop out too much. They settle into the piece right where they should be.

I would say that I would focus on faces and how the movement and expressions change the faces/shading. Not that they're bad, but out of all the incredible work here they are the only thing holding you back from that next level in my opinion. As well this is based on looking at this piece only, so take it as a grain of sand.